Your wording is problematic here because you're writing a generalization. It is not necessarily a fact that American soldiers are heroes in the M.E--that is one of many perspectives. To make this a more accurate thesis statement about the images themselves, answer the question "What is your interpretation of the meaning of this image?" Or, you might answer "What is the photographer's message?" Framing it in a way that focuses on the photographer's message takes the heat off you; instead of saying "This is what I think about this political issue" you should say "This is what the photographer is saying"
Katherine,
ReplyDeleteYour wording is problematic here because you're writing a generalization. It is not necessarily a fact that American soldiers are heroes in the M.E--that is one of many perspectives. To make this a more accurate thesis statement about the images themselves, answer the question "What is your interpretation of the meaning of this image?" Or, you might answer "What is the photographer's message?" Framing it in a way that focuses on the photographer's message takes the heat off you; instead of saying "This is what I think about this political issue" you should say "This is what the photographer is saying"